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Call of Duty Modern Warfare 2
====﻿Call of Duty Modern Warfare 2 is the best game Infinity Ward has ever made. Call of Duty Modern Warfare 2 **(COD MW2)** is about a war some where in the world, the game doesn't tell you where. You are this guy that was saved from **an** ambush on a bridge in the first COD MW. You start at **a** training camp and you have beat it **what is it?** in a certain amount of time. **At** the end of the game **a** guy betrayes you and kills you, then you and **another** guy go to hunt for this guy. At the end of the game, you are almost dead, **but** you throw a throwing knife at the bad guy and he dies. **write a concluding sentence summarizing why it is the best game ever, it is exciting, it is trilling, you learn something**==== ====COD MW2 is a very long game, if you are new to **firsty I do not know what firsty means** person shooter games.The game MW2 would take aproximately 12 hours if you are new to 1st person shooters. The purpose of the game is to find and kill the guy that betrayed your country. There are many different locations inthe game, a lot of them are in Afghanistan. The game is a lot like the war in Afghanistan right now.==== ====COD MW2 is the best game that has ever been on the market. The thing that i like about COD MW2 is that when you play online you can talk to people across the world. I prefer to use the gun Scar H, it's an assault rifle. I usually play the game mode Domination, the objective is to keep all three destinations on the map. I hope that more and more people start playing this game. It is gory and has lots of violence but, it's a really good game.==== ====COD MW2 is a shooting game **that** involves a lot of killing. It fits into the category of really fun shooter games. The game belongs to Infinty Wards which is an American company. COD MW2 is related to the game MAG, which is a first person shooter. COD MW2 is probably the best selling game Ifinity Ward has made. **can you explain a bit more why you think this**====

COD MW2 is similar to MAG, but COD MW2 doesn't have game modes where there are 156 people per map. COD MW2 and MAG have a lot of the same guns, however COD MW2 has more realistic guns. In COD MW2 when you have a sniper rifle and you zoom in, you can move side to side and the scope will bounce. In MAG when you do that the scope stays the same and doesn't move. COD MW2 is a way advanced version of MAG.


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